Tuesday, October 04, 2005

The Warrior!!!

How happy was he born and taught
That serveth not another's will
But here he stands today
Ready for death and prepared to kill

He takes death almost for a ride
Longing for glory and utmost pride
The badges that you see on his chest
Make him different from the rest

He looks into the eyes of death
And tells it "I deserve another breath"
For his passions not his masters are
But only the badges and the star

Something hits him on his head
And he knows tht he is dead
Scattered he is on the sands
With broken legs and broken hands

His mistress calls out to him with a sorrowful voice
But what she can hear is only the cannon's noise
She weeps and weeps loud in despair
Though she knows that he is dead and no more there!!

8 Comments:

Blogger ashwin sundar said...

Beautiful da I thought u were good only with girls

7:14 AM  
Blogger ashwin sundar said...

From now u'll be renamed Kisna -The Warrior poet

10:10 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

fantastic job buddyy!!!!! arjun thts a beautiful n perfect poem..... u write superbily good

5:50 AM  
Anonymous shank said...

kool poems u shold rite more poems like tht which will make u popular n u r the best 4 tht

8:39 AM  
Anonymous nen!!! said...

nice 1 man...i guess tht was ur first...and im the last 1 to read it...lol!!!..seriously dude....nice hobby u r persuing!!!

9:28 AM  
Anonymous Pranit said...

not bad...but i was like is it arjun who wrote this after reading those poems in the wrong order...[:p]...after all those love poems its like one hell of a shock...can love struck arjun actually write about warriors...[:d][:p]...anyway keep it up!!...enjoy!

2:50 AM  
Blogger Revathi said...

Speechless need i say! but for u arjun......i am runin outta words.lol
Amazing concrete images......i mean ur description is leading the reader to ur picture.
kya talent!!! wah!! wah!!. its the best.
STOP BLUSHING!! lol
tc

7:55 AM  
Blogger Parth Jhala said...

one of ur best..right up there!

8:21 AM  

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