Thursday, November 24, 2005

On The Edge Of Life

Livin' on the edge of life I'm tryin' to find my way through it
But lost in darkness I am n' stand here very unfit
"Joyful moments I have'" I sang really loud
But now I realise that it was just a passing cloud

The moments i spent with her were so happy n gay
In complete I am today
Lookin' back at those moments I wonder what i was thinkin'?
But when it all ended I wasn't heart was sinkin'

I couldn't imagine anyone else in her place
Some one comes up to me,'I can keep u happy',she says was an unfamiliar word to me
For nothing other than sorrow did I fancy

"Trust me as I am the one",she said
"I luv u truly" she whispered.......putting her hand on my head
I din't know if her hand promised me luv or tried to push me to the 'Edge Of Life' yet again
But a ray of hope I could see in my life..........gettin' me out of depression n' strain

It was a feeling which I never experienced
In tears of happiness was I drenched
I was in luv......far away from the harsh phases of life
Hadn't she been by my side.........I would have always lived on the 'Edge Of Life'


Blogger ashwin sundar said...

ur getting better with each attempt jus improve ur frequency

10:31 PM  
Anonymous jp/sekar/ramji(RMT) said...

don't listen to ashwin's words...he is stupid

12:24 AM  
Anonymous shashank said...

Kool poems,u should write more poems like this which will make u popular n ur the best 4 tht!!

8:43 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

awsome awsome awsome ijust love this poem of ur its just superb its the best out of all th epoems uv eva written........

8:47 AM  
Anonymous rachna said...

nice poem .......its got a lotta meaning........n deapth.....keep penning down things like dis 1.....

7:05 AM  
Anonymous Shradha said...


10:02 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

DAMN GOOD DUDE .... Awesome..
Does it really go out to somebdy or just a hollow feeling ....
unlike Ash said ,do not increase ur freq .. right once in a while ...

9:22 AM  
Anonymous An!!! said...

THIS is the best you have written so far!!!lots of depth!!!yet again i wonder who this she is!!!lucky girl!!!keep going!!!bring out the amazing poet in you!!!

5:24 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

all i will say is....lots of meaning and ue girl is soo damn lucky man!!!...and the "incredible7" is lucky to have a freind like u too....:D...keep writing poeams man...ill b ur first fan ...actually i!!!!!

9:19 AM  
Anonymous nen said...

by the way the prvious comment was mine only...foegot to write in my name..:p

9:20 AM  
Anonymous nids! said...

edge of life!! this poem ispires me!! its sexy arjun..u really write well!!!
the meanin u get from this poem is just wow!!!!

i agree with An who is this lucky she!! hehe!! poems great arjun!!

12:01 PM  
Anonymous papu!!! said...

sexy poem....a lot of depth...can really feel da luv!!:pi luv dat line..."In tears of happiness was I drenched"...n yes dat girl is lucky....n ur poetic skills rock....keep it goin!!

12:57 AM  
Anonymous Pranit said...

nice are getting better[:p]...full meaning and depth this one has...the best i read till now...keep it up!!..[:d]

1:34 AM  
Anonymous nidarshana said...

heyyyy its got a happy happy ending :d!!!(need i say how sexy it is??)

12:41 PM  
Blogger Revathi said...

New gal kya??lol I njoy readin ur poems more than i did shakespere's.
Damn serious.....u got the talent arjun that u can get to the unreachable.
But seriously I think UR in LOVE. hehe Keep the amazing work.

5:48 PM  

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