X-Girlfriend
My X-girlfriend's out on da streets tryin' her luck
Shez out wid a guy.............n' yea he sucks
She was just the perfect gal for me I thought
But in complete false impression was I caught
I can't imagine the amount of time I spent with her
But it was too late when I realised that I can't trust her any further
She meant the world to me...........I can't believe I ever thought so
She wasn't worth me I thought..............tryin' to supress my sorrow
Yea, the parting did hurt me for some time
But later I realised that I was purely wastin' time
Coz she would get under the sheets n' do nethin for a buck
And to people like her.............I give a fuck
'One night stand' was her only fuckin' motto
Oh 'fuckin'......that probably better describes her motto
What else do I say about her???? I don't find any more brated words
My X-girlfriend that she was..........I whole-heartedly curse
P.S:- I kno U wont like this..............but I really njoyed writin' it
Shez out wid a guy.............n' yea he sucks
She was just the perfect gal for me I thought
But in complete false impression was I caught
I can't imagine the amount of time I spent with her
But it was too late when I realised that I can't trust her any further
She meant the world to me...........I can't believe I ever thought so
She wasn't worth me I thought..............tryin' to supress my sorrow
Yea, the parting did hurt me for some time
But later I realised that I was purely wastin' time
Coz she would get under the sheets n' do nethin for a buck
And to people like her.............I give a fuck
'One night stand' was her only fuckin' motto
Oh 'fuckin'......that probably better describes her motto
What else do I say about her???? I don't find any more brated words
My X-girlfriend that she was..........I whole-heartedly curse
P.S:- I kno U wont like this..............but I really njoyed writin' it
posted by Arjun at 11:38 AM
18 Comments:
its a dreadful story if true lover is lovin some one this is watt he is gettin really bad abt da guy but a wonderful poem which is expressing his true love abt da gal........ and ofcorse his sorrow .............poor soul .
It was a gr8 poem!!! i really njoyed readin it!!! u shud hv used some more foul words!!!! the poem would hv been more spicier!!!!
LOL nice way 2 curse someone...u cud've done a bit more better..lemme also contribute
The only reason she went under the rug
Was to steal some cheap money like a thug
hey!!!i find this a rather bad one.........coz all ur othr poems seem pretty sophisticated....n this onez kinda........not my cup of tea
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Nice one yaar
thoda aur dede na while ur at it!
lol anyways nice poem somehow i never knew this side of u!
hell i dunno any side of u!
rock on!
Ani
very well written!!!hope you werent referring to anyone though!!!if you were then it is horrible!!!
man...u r quite a poet....but seriously man...u need gutts to do tht on public forum tht is if u were reffering it to sum1....nice 1 dude!!!!!!
i completely agree wid wat an said....its a nice poem....but if ur really refferin to some one...no offense....but its disgustin!!
hehehe....completely the truth...nice usage of words[:P]...and as your bro said....nice way to curse someone[:d]
hey arjun!!not a bad attempt at all dude...remember one thing..poetry is all abt expression so even if sumone does not like it....u shudn't care any lesser!!!i think it was an awesum piece of wrk dude!!take care and cya!!
Vinie.
heya arjun !!! i like this one !!!bloody cursed like anythn !!!! but still kewl !!! i had fun readin it !!!!
shweta !!
lol...i luvd it!!! one way to vent ur anger out!! lovely job arjun!!
well arjun...!!!u've got it ri8 and abt the poems cant stop myself from goin thru dem again and again.well u write pretty well boy....go on will b d 1st person to pick ur collection of mystries
I think such people can be stoned to death..if this is ur story thn sorry buddy...back to the blog...trust me i felt like it was a hard rock song!...i loved it!
Phew!! wow...never saw dat side of u. Hope dat wasnt all ture.
I was puttin sum ghetto accent in while readin in it......like a rap song. Full of strong fellings. Pakka Hardcore.
Thats another kind of talent that u hav. HOw many?? Extraordinary.
Dat was really good Arjun. sounds so real.
"MOODSWINGS" hehehe
good luck.
arjun .. u were great !
i really liked this one..
its rude.. but its fun !
i loved it
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