Thursday, January 11, 2007

Me Myself n' I

Followin' the shriekin cries of a beautiful lady
He made his way into this beautiful world
It aint all that beautiful he thought as he made his way
For,he wailed aloud n' they were all happy n' gay

Holdin' the fingers of his mother....he learnt to walk
Observin' the lips of his father....he learnt to talk
He saw his world in the two of them
N' it seemed all beautiful to him

Wailin' n' unwillingly goin' to school..he din't wanna get rid of those fingers
Away from them,an uncertainy always lingers
He was scared to meet new people n' scared of everythin' around him
Without a choice,he left his world behind n' entered the one awaitin' him

Lookin' back at his childhood....he wondered what he was scared of
The irony was that fear is all that he was made of
A fear which made him so very narrow
An uncertainity walked with him like a shadow

Day in n' day out he came up with unanswered questions
He'd been walkin' alone in search of suggestions
Now he's all down n' broken.....his life lacked smiles,laughters n' cheers
Even the liberty of cryin was stolen.....as he was left with no tears

Somewhere down the road,on the long walk
He came across people who,with him were ready to talk
The cheer of his childhood began to sway
The unanswered questions faded away

He brought them the same cheer that they brought him
Suddenly....happiness seemed to have filled up to the brim
Toghether they reached for the sky which no more seemed high
He then grew with happiness all around him....grew from He to I

12 Comments:

Anonymous ritika said...

okieee.....so im like d 1st 1 2 write a comment......wel jun lemme tel u this poem of urs rocks.....could picturise d whole scene while i was readin it......pretty gud....tough 1......u hit it good jun.......lukin 4ward 2 many mor.......AL D BEST!!!.....take care....ritzz......

11:28 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

hey arjun !! this ones vry nice .. i love the start n d end !!! man u r so good !!! keep up d great wrk !!
take care !!
shweta !!

12:42 PM  
Anonymous Parth!! said...

hey!!! kipling!!!...sexy stuff re...difficult to write..made it look easy!!! thats what poetry is all about after all!!! u deliver the killer punch amazingly well re..something i will always envy!! !!! hehe...great one!!! keep it up!!!

12:20 AM  
Blogger nids!!! said...

i have told u already i love it!!! genrally ur poems u dont have to search for hidden meanings they are always overflowing with them... but this ones like a mystery... to know everything... u had to know u!!! quite frankly i find it super deep!!! its one of my favs!!! ummmaaah!!! stay amazing arj!!!

5:32 AM  
Blogger ashwin sundar said...

Wonderful one!this should be ur best to date and stop using n and lookin and such passes in poems..it degrades the quality...

12:24 PM  
Anonymous papu!!! said...

aww....i soso love da way u started it!!da 1st 4lines r da best ever man!!!da whole poem was nice...!!but da startin n da end steal da show!!![:p]he grew from he to i!woow!!!da whole poem is so well written...n ya...ders a lot more to u dan wat i thought!!n ders one side of u i hardly knw...n im gettin to knw...n i'm glad i am!!![:D]

10:52 PM  
Anonymous Pranit said...

hey!!..good one!!..but wouldnt call it the best!!..and i personally feel it was too short..tells very little about you!!..but like you said you wanted to write only about that one part of your life so it doesnt really matter!!..and the beginning and the end are awesome!!..thats what i like in your poems..those few catchy lines that you can never forget!!..keep writing!!

12:09 PM  
Anonymous kavu! said...

hey! gr8 work!....nice one-liners...spkin abt tht ....my fav 1 is the last line...it is so nice...keep it up!

1:28 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

good blog. keep rocking!

12:13 AM  
Blogger ramya said...

man...this one's good! i like how u showed like a journey thru life and its stages. i think its something that others can relate to...at the same it has ur own identity to ittt

2:16 PM  
Blogger rachna said...

hey arjun!!!! now....i knw i've praised u enuf!!!! but my comments keep gettin added 2 ur credentials!!! anyway....here goes another comment of appreciation!!!awesome sweety!! keep up da good work n keep makin me proud of u!!!!!!

6:27 AM  
Blogger Revathi said...

O boy!! def had a lil tear while reading it. It is jus really touching and one of the best i should say.

4:34 PM  

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