A Saucerful Of Secrets
The world often turns its back on you in the worst of times
You feel like a caged criminal without any crimes
Longin' for warmth....you look up to someone to hear "all is well"
N' if they too turn their backs on you....Life becomes a synonym for hell
They gave you love n' care which were nothin' but impostors
To believe this harsh fact....you aint masters
As it begins to sink in...you try to fight it
Eventually you give in....as you lack the grit
Durin' these days.....you realize what life really is
With every step that you take.....a barrier exists
These barriers shape n' mould you into masters
They teach you how to treat those very impostors
Ironically,you take in those harsh facts n' become harsh yourself
This in turn imposes harsh facts on the people you once looked up to
Thus.....the cycle continues n' life revolves around itself
In the end.....A Saucerful Of Secrets is what it leaves for you
You feel like a caged criminal without any crimes
Longin' for warmth....you look up to someone to hear "all is well"
N' if they too turn their backs on you....Life becomes a synonym for hell
They gave you love n' care which were nothin' but impostors
To believe this harsh fact....you aint masters
As it begins to sink in...you try to fight it
Eventually you give in....as you lack the grit
Durin' these days.....you realize what life really is
With every step that you take.....a barrier exists
These barriers shape n' mould you into masters
They teach you how to treat those very impostors
Ironically,you take in those harsh facts n' become harsh yourself
This in turn imposes harsh facts on the people you once looked up to
Thus.....the cycle continues n' life revolves around itself
In the end.....A Saucerful Of Secrets is what it leaves for you
posted by Arjun at 11:11 AM
13 Comments:
i love it!!! the idea behind it is a beauty!! ummmaah!!! its written really well... and i connect really well to it!!! its a world of laughter and tears! we get a lil bit of both... when in tears... remember the world doesnt mean harm... it just wishes to mould!!! ur experiences shape!! and i just wanna say urs have done a great job!! ummmaah!
hey!!! u toh na...full making my poems look small and incomparable!! kipling only youre becoming!! 'impostors and masters'!! good idea...how u wrote it made it better..does not reveal much...but at the same time shows enough!!! bravo!!
Take my word..scrap this one off from ur blog..too many errors..u have just tried fitting things in unlike the last one which was a flow of thoughts...
woow!!...someones gettin really philosophic by da day!!!:pbut its soo true...life is indeed nothin but "A Saucerful Of Secrets"every step of ur life teaches u somethin!!difficylties..as u said barriers..slap u into shape...n sculpt u into masters!!!life makes u tough...!!its been like dat...is like dat...n will alwaz be da same!!n none cud have put it better dan u did..da whole idea behind it is simply awsome!!keep goin...!!!
heyy jun nice 1 again ree.......
but im waitin 4 sumthin funny next time.....enough of d serious thoughts jun......time 4 a lil change....wt say jun??....wt say ppl???
wel i say wat i already did...ur better dan wordsworth!! he writes bullshit bout nature..but u r lik no words....amazin poems jun!!dey r AWESUM..LOVE EM....d best part iz tat ur poems depict relity n its easier ta find a connection wid em..n dis poem iz really special ta me..(ya know d reason)..hehe..newe..its really nice..every1 who wil read it wil tink u hav written it keepin em in mind cz dey r so close ta wat v keep facin..hats off ta u!!m n awe o ur works..!
lovely poem!!..its a poem to which most people can connect!!..a really good idea!!..seriously from where do you guys get such amazing ideas??..there is so much of meaning in the poem and its as close as possible to reality!!..keep writing!!..and give tough competition to parth!![:p]..i want to read better ones in the future!![:)]
gr8 writin bro...dey r awesum every one of dem wat lovely ideas potrayed i em really nice ...here is ur official nick name...ricky wordsworth...or i think william punter would be better .....he he .....keep writin .... and keep rockin!!!!!il est tres bien garcon...fille would have been better ....lol......
hey arjun !! this ones vry nice .. vry real .. but a lil negative .. i felt so ... n yeah .. life is actually a saucerful of secrets !!surprises n shocks .. we have to face it all !! and i blive in facing them with a smile ![:)]!! so keep smilin !! n keep writin !! great job !! [:)] .. have fun !
wow..i like the whole metaphor of "saucerful of secrets"! it has some really nice insights too. kinda shows me some things from ur perspectiveee. good job!
hey there!! well u know this was my least fav of all ur serious poems!! read it again...and i think my opinion has changed..now i can relate to it..and appreciate the thought...and its beauty..nice!!
"The world often turns its back on you in the worst of times
You feel like a caged criminal without any crimes"
the first two lines did me in!! neways..now i have to go and decide which one is my least fav! hehe! bubbye!
well........u dont luk one....but u r a person wid very deep thoughts, deep emotions!!!but i must say.....u r one hellova poet!!!! i jus luv da way u put ur thoughts in words.....as a poem!!!! marvellous baby!!! simple marvellous!!!!!!!!!
Your r really INCREDIBLE!!!!!!
Good one. Sabse Alag for sure!!
"A Saucerful of secrets" dats gonna remind me of ya forever.hehe
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