Thursday, April 01, 2010

The Invisible Thread

In your dream, when you walk alone
You see things that are insane
But when you are awake, you know
That there’s much more to pain

There’s really more than you can think
Between those alive and dead
But you don’t tend to understand
Because you cannot see the thread

You see what you see
But you don’t really comprehend
‘coz from the truth you cannot flee
But you’ve got to get to the other end

There’s really more than you can think
Between the truth and what you see
But you don’t really understand
In which part you want to be

You dream gives you hope
That you can be what you want to
But when you are awake and you act your dream
You know it cannot be true

There’s really more than you can think
Between those alive and dead
But you don’t tend to understand
Because invisible is the thread

3 Comments:

Blogger ashwin sundar said...

nice one da.. sounds like a philosphic sojourn.. try writing it as text na rather than a poem.. with more detailing.. would be great reading if written as a prose..

6:44 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

ennnada macha nalla pode!!!
i guess u did justice to the thought you had..would have loved a couple of paras more!! it was almost beginning to have a floyd taste to it..
keep writing sivamani!!!

Approved by the Godfather. :P

8:41 AM  
Blogger Srinidhi said...

I like!
I agree with the godfather if longer it would have been more awesome! :)

12:33 AM  

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