Thursday, April 26, 2007

A Long Wait...

Days have come and days have gone
I see in my heart.....a stitched thorn
It sure is true and can't be wrong
My love for her will never be gone!

I see the rain pour down through the sky
In tears am I....when I watch her fly
The world is ignorant coz through the rain I cry
To lay my love on her.....as hard as I can....I try!

Lost in love I am.....sleeping as much
Waiting for her to wake me up with her soothing touch
A source of strength she is....I use her shoulder as my crutch
Just unable to tell her....I am not a liar as such!

Driven am I so beautifully by the bond that we share
To find someone like her......is so very rare
Not a chance there is......that a mask I wear
It is nothing but the love for her....that in my heart I bear!

I've always held her so close to my heart
Now she has grown closer to me than my very heart
All this while she has been with me in this wheel of cart
I've learnt to live life and I owe everything to her part!

At my best I am when I'm with her....and I stand really tall
Even a moment away from her.....I hear the 'THUD' of fall
With her around me.....love and happinesss is all
I will wait through eternity for her heart to return my call!

16 Comments:

Blogger ashwin sundar said...

Good one! but I guess there are better things to do!!

6:56 AM  
Blogger Parth Jhala said...

strikes a chord even in hearts where its not supposed to! its bloody hell amazin..the thoughts right thru make it so! and very well written!! makes for a wonderful poetry! ur best! dont write such ones re..ill feel insecure about my such ones!! hehe! if that made sense! cant say this enuf..but i loooou this poem! the naked truth..so beautifully draped and jewel studded!keep writing..dont stop writing..itl be the worst mistake u make! this poem is a gem! just like the one who wrote it!

7:18 AM  
Blogger nids!!! said...

arju!! what re!!! any shame u have!!! u wrote poems like this! then what ill do but cry!!! i love it!! it expresses stuff oh soo beautifully!! im unable to say what i felt after reading it!!! its just heart warming and over whelming!! ur giving paarth competition alright!!! hehe!! sowwie!

9:05 AM  
Blogger Ritika said...

heyy jun tat was real nice...full feeling se haan.....sentiii 1...my kindd.....so lovedd it.....keep goin.....u inspirin me harder nww.....2 cum up wit 1 soon...n i hope d girl around whom this poem revolves comes 2 u.....ur love.....rockk on!!.....tc...ritz

10:18 AM  
Anonymous papu!! said...

hey...whose dat girl?!!!hehe...da poem was woooowww!!!every line was extraordinary!!dis sure can be published!!some lines where kinda filimy alos!!hehe...to some it up...its ur best so far!!loved it!!:D...each poem of urs is betta dan da previous dude...ur gettin really gud...n dats gr8!!

10:50 AM  
Blogger Pranit said...

this one is real good!!..but who's the girl??:p!!..one of the best you have written!!..you are seriously giving parth tough competition!!:p.. keep writing!!..and may they keep getting better!!:) have fun!!..see ya!!..keep it up!!..

1:17 PM  
Blogger rachna said...

too cool man!!!!!do u take classes or sumthn 4 writing poems!!!! if u dont....start takin....i'll be da 1st one 2 join thm!!!!:)

6:31 AM  
Blogger anirudh said...

amazin one ra gud goin keep it up bt i guess u hav to ans a lotta ppl abt who the grl lolz tc

8:31 AM  
Blogger kavu! said...

kya baat hai!full love poet u r!if u will write like this,what about people like me?!ahem!coming back to the poem...it is "wow!"...this defines it all....i really mean it!no doubt u r a gem ...a gem for sure!

8:02 AM  
Anonymous mark said...

jus too good maan... u always blow me off wid these poems of urz! keep it goin maan!

12:57 AM  
Anonymous Aru$h! said...

there r not enuf words in a dictionary 2 describe this guys talent!! arjun??? wer did cha get all this from huh?????? ur simply superb!! this poem is so beautifully expressed... hav no words 2 praise it!!! u rock dude!! keep up the gud work!!!

10:06 AM  
Anonymous ÅŕŬśĦ said...

Hey...whoever posted tha above comment...i tolttaly agree wid yaa....the poem rockzz....but plezee...nxt time...uze ur own name....(whyz thiz world full o som many wierd ppl)...anywayz arjun rock on...din know my frnd wz such a.....þõëť....

7:51 AM  
Blogger Revathi said...

Ok now!! Y r u doin fashion designing?? heheh Dude u r full of talent. The words u use, the way u use em is jus mind blowing. U jus get to the point wid all that you have to say. INCREDIBLE!!!!!! Who is this girl now?? lol
All the best Arjun!!

4:49 PM  
Blogger Revathi said...

xoxoxox lol

7:31 AM  
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Blogger Parth Jhala said...

just came across ur blog..read this first and didnt have the heart to continue reading! depressed me beautifully! >:D<..

1:11 PM  

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